This is my blog I got started when i joined Mr.Fassbenders E-journaling class and really first ityped up a story i wrote then it became completly random
Wednesday, July 27, 2011
THE ONE CONTINUDE
The doctor came and Jax told his mom he had to go because the doctor was talking to him. “Is she okay” Jax asked “Yes she will be fine” The doctor replied “ Can I go see her” Jax asked “Yea go ahead” The doctor replied Jax ran to Rachel’s room “Hey Honey” Jax said “Jax, you came back, I didn’t think you were going to come back” Rachel said “Why wouldn’t I come back” Jax asked “ I don’t know , but you stormed out of here so fast , and you looked really mad “ Rachel said “ I know I looked mad but I wanted to go see who it you and I found out who it was “ Jax said “who was it “ Rachel asked “ It was Will” Jax said “ But he’s only 19” Rachel said “Yea but anyone could get beer if they have friends 21” Jax said “yea your right” Rachel said When Jax went home his mom was waiting for him, she knew how upset he was, She hated when her son was upset . She would do anything for his pain to be cast onto her instead of him having to deal with it. “ Hey Boo” Jax’s mom said “Hey mom” Jax cried “Mom I don’t want her to die , I couldn’t handle it!!!” Jax cried “ Boo it will be fine, she will be fine” Jax’s mom said “I’m going to bed” Jax said “Okay boo” Jax’s mom said The next day Jax woke up and went to school to get his assignments then headed to the hospital to see Rachel. He went to talk to the Doctor. “How is she, do you know when she will be able to go home” Jax asked “She’s doing a lot better and we think she’ll be able to go home Friday but she would have to stay home for a week “ Doctor Gray replied “ okay I’ll have her stay at my my house” Jax said “Okay” Doctor Gray said “ can I go see her?” Jaxs asked “ yea “ Doctor gray said When Jax got down to Rachel’s room room she was asleep, Jax notices how peacefull she is when she sleeps. Jax watches her sleep. Shes so freaking beautiful. He sat down on the couch in her room and fell asleep. When he woke up Rachel asked if he had slept their. “No I just got here about an hour ago” Jax said “Oh” Rachel said “The doctor said that you most likely can come home Friday and since your parents aren’t home you can stay at my house “ Jax said “Okay baby that sounds good and im tired of hospital food” Rachel said “on Saturday I’ll make you a great dinner” Jax said “Okay baby , I love you” Rachel said “I love you too” Jax said
THE ONE CONTINUDE
“I love you too” Jax replied
When Jax got home he was sitting on the couch watching TV, when Jax got a phone call saying Rachel had been in a car accident. He immediately left to go to the hospital, when he got their the doctor said that she was lucky to be alive.
“was it her fault……the accident “Jax asked
“No, the guy that hit her was drunk he walked away with no bruises or anything” The doctor said
“Can I go see her” Jax asked
“No she unconscious” The doctor said
Jax sat their shocked and scared. He sat there with his head in his hands crying, thinking to himself he finally got the girl and he could lose her forever at any minute.
All of the sudden a doctor came out and told jax that Rachel wanted him.
“hey honey” Jax said
“hey” Rachel replied
“How are you feeling …… besides having been in a car accident” Jax asked
“Better that you’re here” Rachel replied
Jax leaned down and kissed Rachel’s forehead.
Rachel felt a tear run down his cheek.
“Jax don’t cry I’m going to be fine “Rachel said
“But I love you and I can’t lose you” Jax cried
When Jax went to the police department to find out who hit Rachel and he found out it was will. Jax found out that will was going to jail for a long time, because he was drinking underage , DUI and attempted murder because he found out that he threatened to kill Rachel. When will saw Jax he flipped out and started shaking and yelling get me out of here! When Jax saw them he just laughed then left.
When Jax got back to the hospital he found out Rachel had been in surgery since he left , because when he left Rachel thought he wasn’t coming back for some reason. Her heart started beating abnormally fast and she couldn’t breath so they put her in surgery. Jax sat down and started crying then he prayed , he hadn’t prayed in years . He asked that god save Rachel because he loved her. He knew that she was the one for her and she shouldn’t die! If anyone dies it should be me . Jax called his mom to tell her what had happened . When he told his mom he just started crying.
“Honey it will be fine” Jax’s mom said
“Okay mom” Jax said
When Jax got home he was sitting on the couch watching TV, when Jax got a phone call saying Rachel had been in a car accident. He immediately left to go to the hospital, when he got their the doctor said that she was lucky to be alive.
“was it her fault……the accident “Jax asked
“No, the guy that hit her was drunk he walked away with no bruises or anything” The doctor said
“Can I go see her” Jax asked
“No she unconscious” The doctor said
Jax sat their shocked and scared. He sat there with his head in his hands crying, thinking to himself he finally got the girl and he could lose her forever at any minute.
All of the sudden a doctor came out and told jax that Rachel wanted him.
“hey honey” Jax said
“hey” Rachel replied
“How are you feeling …… besides having been in a car accident” Jax asked
“Better that you’re here” Rachel replied
Jax leaned down and kissed Rachel’s forehead.
Rachel felt a tear run down his cheek.
“Jax don’t cry I’m going to be fine “Rachel said
“But I love you and I can’t lose you” Jax cried
When Jax went to the police department to find out who hit Rachel and he found out it was will. Jax found out that will was going to jail for a long time, because he was drinking underage , DUI and attempted murder because he found out that he threatened to kill Rachel. When will saw Jax he flipped out and started shaking and yelling get me out of here! When Jax saw them he just laughed then left.
When Jax got back to the hospital he found out Rachel had been in surgery since he left , because when he left Rachel thought he wasn’t coming back for some reason. Her heart started beating abnormally fast and she couldn’t breath so they put her in surgery. Jax sat down and started crying then he prayed , he hadn’t prayed in years . He asked that god save Rachel because he loved her. He knew that she was the one for her and she shouldn’t die! If anyone dies it should be me . Jax called his mom to tell her what had happened . When he told his mom he just started crying.
“Honey it will be fine” Jax’s mom said
“Okay mom” Jax said
Tuesday, July 26, 2011
THE ONE CONTINUDE
Chapter two
The next day they were at school.
“Hey honey “Rachel said
“Hey” Jax said
“You want to hang out tonight” Rachel asked
“Cant I have a football thing since we won the last game of the season” Jax replied
“Awe that sucks” Rachel stated
“Yea I know maybe I can swing by afterwards” Jax said
“that would be fine , and guess what” Rachel said
“What “Jax asked
“I love you” Rachel said
“I love you too “Jax said
When Jax left to go to his locker Rachel looked over and saw her best friend Bree running up too her.
“Hey Rachel” Bree called
“Hey Bree” Rachel said
“What was that all about?” Bree asked
“ me and Jax are going out “Rachel replied
“WOW” Bree yelled
“yea I know , he’s so nice and hes not stuck up like the other football players”Rachel said
“Rachel” Jax called
“yes honey”Rachel replied
“ I forgot to tell you that you left all your stuff in my truck last night “Jax said
“Okay I’ll get it later “Rachel replied
“What stuff” Bree asked
“I’ll show you what he got me later “Rachel said
“Okay…… what he bought you?”Bree replied confused
“Yep it’s a beautiful dress “Rachel said
When Rachel went to class, Jax signed out of school and went to a jewelry store. He bought her a necklace that was two hearts intertwined. When he got back school was over and Jax texted Rachel and told her to come to the truck. When Rachel got to the truck Jax leaned in and kissed her. When they finally stopped kissing Rachel called Bree over. Rachel opened the door and pulled out the dress and shoes Jax got her.
“That dress is amazing” Bree squealed
“Theirs something else” Jax said
Rachel put the dress and shoes in her car and grabbed the jewelry box.
“oh my god its beautiful” Rachel yelled
Rachel kissed Jax and whispered I love you in his ear.
THE ONE
There I was stalking the most beautiful girl in 9th grade “again”. She was waiting for her boyfriend, but I’m quarterback I deserve her. But she’s not the type of girl that likes popular guys. She’s so beautiful with her black hair, blue eyes, wearing a black poison shirt, gray skinny jeans and purple vans holding a point break binder. Whenever I talk to her I freeze up and stutter and look like an idiot. It was Friday we had the last football game of the season, when I looked up I saw her boyfriend yelling at her I couldn’t hear why but he was. Finally it was time for the game and I saw the girl of my dreams there. when the game started we scored the first two points and by halftime we were ahead by 4 points and when I was sitting on the bench I saw something I never want to see again her boyfriend just slapped her, when I saw that I jumped the fence and grabbed him by his black shaggy hair and pulled him down the belchers then beat the crap out of him.
“Don’t you ever think about hitting another girl again you stupid idiot” I said
We won the game, Rachel came up to me and said
“Thank you and congratulations”
“Thanks, do you want to hang out sometime” Jax said
“Is that how you ask a girl out Jax “Rachel Asked?
“Would you like to go to the movies next Friday around 8 o’clock” Jax asked
“Yes I do “Rachel said
Chapter one
“Hey Rachel are you ready to go” Jax asked
“Yea lets go “Rachel said
When they got there her exboyfriend Will was there and Rachel started to panic.
“If you want we can go do something else” Jax said
“Yea lets go do that “Rachel said
As they were walking around Mayfair Rachel saw a dress and was just staring at it. It was pink and strapless it was really long. I pulled Rachel into the store and made her try on the dress and the person that worked their brought her over some black high heels, after she tried on the dress and shoes I took them to the register.
“You don’t have to buy that for me” Rachel said
“Your right I don’t but I want too” Jax said
After Jax bought the dress and shoes they left Mayfair and got in his ford F150 and they started driving home
“Hey do you want to go mudding “Jax asked
“Sure” Rachel replied
Jax drove to his favorite mudding spot and started going really fast into big mud puddles.
“Do you want look at the stars “Jax asked
“Yea” Rachel replied
Before Jax got in the back of the truck he turned the radio up and it was on 101.3 the song she’s country by Jason Aldean was on and Rachel started singing along to it.
“Jax can I ask you a question “Rachel asked
“Yea”Jax replied
“Why did you do what you did at the game?” Rachel asked
“Because vie been in love with you since 5th grade and no man would ever lay a hand on a women it’s just not right to lay a hand on a women” Jax replied
After Jax said that Rachel started crying and Jax leaned over and hugged her
“ Jax I think I love you” Rachel whispered in Jax’s ear
“I love you too”jax said
Jax finally took her home
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